| As is described in the picture, a person was persuaded into a smalll cage, who was told he would be cured of his fear of snakes, heights, small spaces and commitment in just six hours in that way. Additionally, the cage, with some snakes inside, was high up on four columns. According to my understanding, the picture describes a person with some mental disability, as a result of which, he prefers to stay in large spaces with other’s company. However, the doctor is trying all his out to help the person, supposing that it’s more difficult for such patients to recover if they are only treated by means of pleasing them. Instead of offering him medicine, the doctor has his unique way of treating this patient, pushing him to face his problems directly. From my perspective, life is filled with ups and downs. It goes beyond doubt that under no circumstances should we avoid challenges or responsibility. Quite the contray, we are supposed to face them with courage and wisdom. |
| 試題分析：本書面表達是壹篇圖畫類寫作。這類題壹般要求考生仔細看圖，根據題目要求寫成自己的作文。實際上，圖畫作文也可以當作三段式的提綱作文來寫。第壹段用來描述圖畫並揭示其寓意(寓意壹般用壹句話來概括就可以)，第二段分析原因，最後壹段發表評論或提出建議，其中第二、三段應該是寫作的重點。 亮點說明文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如persuade into，cure of，according to，as a result of, prefer to，by means of，instead of， be filled with， be supposed to；還運用句型as及which引導的非限定性定語從句。並註意了句子的銜接如：additionally，however，or 等等。 |